Assignment 1 Pre Draft

This blog is a summary of how my paper will initially be set up and is not in any way finished or formulated yet. This paper will require my knowledge of chapter one and chapter two. Therefore it will employ my creativity in how to make an argument make sense in a way that I address it to my audience and the intended audience of the initial audience that the creator of the picture was written to.

Lyndeidra Rice

06 June 2012

English 101

Something descriptively Catchy:

Yep it’s going to be a good title

            Somewhere in this sentence will be a direct to the point, clear cut thesis. This is where I will begin my argument about the severity of animal testing and how controversial it is in regards to the purity, sacrificial, and selflessness afflicted upon the innocent animals, just as Christians believe that Christ was pure and innocent when he surrendered to the harsh death of being crucified on the cross to protect his followers from their sins. My thesis along with supporting evidence will catch the reader’s eyes and direct them to the argument of the paper in regards to the picture referring to religious beliefs. Now readers will get shocked when they see the depiction of a pure white colored rat hanging on a wooden cross. The play on Christ’s crucifixion to the unholy act of animal testing is the fire to the argument of the paper which will be the main focal point that I will display as the topic. I will use elements that I learned in Chapter one to grab the attention of the readers and to stay on target with the argumentative task at hand. I will use my knowledge of rhetoric devices to counter argue and/or persuade the readers to see animal testing as unjust: the main argument that I will be building on. Although the picture that I have chosen does not have any words, the image is jaw dropping and alone figuratively says more about the cruel treatment than actual text could.